Hi I'm Charles and today I want to tell you about how mad Mr R got just during singing. It even made me angry. there were a couple of girls that didn't want to sing. I was thinking why in cheese is Mr R forcing them to sing when they can't. They said they only know how to sing pretty polly. I was quite sad then they sang. It was awful but Mr R said this is such a waste waste waste of my time take these voiceless girls out of here.

It was so sad
 and then when the other girls came they sang beautiful.They also sang a beautiful Song. then the other girl that sang awfully she said she had a nightmare about It. 

now after all that had happened we had to do exams. She was sitting next to me and telling me all about the nightmare. After exams they said we must learn to do a new type of sum it took way too long.


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  1. Liamsc13 May 2019 at 03:22

    That guy is mean to you.

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  2. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 09:14

    Jamie, I can see you have done some editing. Your first paragraph is set out correctly, but you need to check your second and third paragraph as well. There are a few things you have not included in your post, so make sure you have read the instructions carefully. For example, you don't mention if you had to sing and how Mr R treated you and Bennie.

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